Space Disease

Firstly, it's imperative that I say that this beautiful rendition is somewhat heart-stopping. The scheme you have executed is wonderfully incredible. It is understandable to me that you applied yourself to the fullest with your full scope of techniques. The shape of this piece is decisevely exact for the symbolism that I expect you are aiming to encapsulate, but with thought this observation is likely fruitless. Despite that, I think that your implementation of shape could of used some improvements as I think that it wasn't able to match the elegance observable in the rest of the creation. Finally I would like to announce that it has been a treat to invest energy in this critique for you and I feel it will allow you to improve your excellent piece.